We are a class at New Windsor School from Auckland, New Zealand. We learn, create and share around our school values be respectful, be responsible and be the best we can be.
You are wonderful authors! I am very impressed with the words you have carefully selected to use, to create an impact. I will show my class your writing as fantastic examples!
Wow room 25. Your descriptive sentences are absolutely, gobsmackingly amazing. If you had written a book and these were the opening sentences in chapter one, I am positive that you would have all your readers turning the pages for more!
Keep up the great work.
I like Mrs Leung will show my class your fantastic stories as examples of wonderful, descriptive writing!
You are wonderful authors! I am very impressed with the words you have carefully selected to use, to create an impact. I will show my class your writing as fantastic examples!
ReplyDeletewow,all these sentences are much better than they were before and much much more interesting than before too.
ReplyDeleteWow! these sentences are wonderful! I wander where those lame sentences sound like. If I had a class I would show these sentences.
ReplyDeleteI love these sentences, they are so interesting, and I love the adjectives that everyone used in these sentences.
ReplyDeleteVery creative writing Room 25.
ReplyDeleteMrs Amrita Biswas (Emili's Mum)
Wow room 25. Your descriptive sentences are absolutely, gobsmackingly amazing. If you had written a book and these were the opening sentences in chapter one, I am positive that you would have all your readers turning the pages for more!
ReplyDeleteKeep up the great work.
I like Mrs Leung will show my class your fantastic stories as examples of wonderful, descriptive writing!