We are a class at New Windsor School from Auckland, New Zealand. We learn, create and share around our school values be respectful, be responsible and be the best we can be.
Thursday, 6 November 2014
Some Fantastic Sentences From Room 25
We looked at a picture of a gorilla in a massive green jungle. We had to decide if we wanted to describe the jungle or the gorilla.
Here are some of our best sentences:
“The gorilla is as black as a starry night sky.” – Ezekiel
“There was a beautiful waterfall with sparkly water, that any animal could drink” – Enobong
“The gorilla was as hangry as me” – Ruby
“I saw a gorilla and it looked black and white.” – Isaac
“The gorilla is as humongous as a dinosaur leg.” – Aleesha
“The people should run far, far away from the king of the gorillas.” – Aleesha
“The gorilla ran as fast as a cheetah running across an African desert” – Cassidy
“The gorilla has shiny little flick in his fur like shining stars.” – Layaan
“The gorilla was as strong as the Hulk” – Havana
“The gorilla has greedy eyes, like a famished lion.” – Habiba
“His big massive muscles bang the Earth like he wants to destroy it, so only his tribe will rule the Earth.” – Kedius
“A saw a gorilla that was as fat as Santa.” – Shania
“The leaves were as soft as silk” – Amber
“I saw silver big ferns, the colour of my dad’s beard.” – Amber
“The gorilla’s fur is as black as darkness without light.” – Denise
“All the green of the jungle looks like a bunch of leaves on the group” - Jazmine
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Wow you guys got great sentences.I really like how you describe the picture in one sentence.What other sentence will you write ?.
ReplyDeleteI really like the topic you guys chose.Was it hard or easy.
ReplyDeleteHi Dorian, thank you for your comment. It wasn't too hard to write our sentences. We did a lot of talking before we wrote the sentences, which helped us with ideas.
DeleteSome of those sentences are great they really described the gorilla from Emma
ReplyDeleteThanks for your comment Emma. What sentence would you write using the gorilla picture?
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